gigi
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Post by gigi on Jun 30, 2011 15:02:34 GMT -8
(needs a little work Farah)
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Post by Ancientstar on Jul 10, 2011 21:35:41 GMT -8
(No offense but she's right Farah.... there needs to be more actions than just sitting somewhere)
(Instead of just putting sat somewhere you could try this.)
Cloud sat next to Eve in the dining hall drinking some milkberry tea with a roasted mouse sitting on her plate.
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Post by gigi on Jul 11, 2011 18:35:02 GMT -8
Ash spoke through the comotion" owls of te great tree, the rebellion of te pure ones has gone, but years later, how are we supposed to know if another will spring?"
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Post by Ancientstar on Jul 11, 2011 18:41:33 GMT -8
Cloud almost spat out her tea in mid-sip. Eve straitened her back and spoke loud enough to be herd,"Pardon, your highness, but we haven't any idea. All we can do is wait with our 'eyes and ears' open." (As in spies)
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Post by gigi on Jul 11, 2011 18:48:51 GMT -8
"It seems as though there has been a disturbance in our kingdom, we do not know what to expect." said Ash worried
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